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Yeah...Been working on a portfolio for 2009.

Figured it's about time I get back on the horse, back in the game you know ?? The only way to get a job pretty much is to apply for it. :D

This piece I'd say is about 90% complete. There's still a few issues with the skin on the girl in front and lighting on the two side girls faces.
Based off a character in a comic I should be working on, but been too busy thinking about myself.

Sometimes I kinda wish I was still studying, only so I can see what my work looks like on a Mac screen. I sooooo need to calibrate my monitors. I wish they still had Adobe Gamma.

Anyways, some feedback would be great, fantastic even. Thanks for stopping by guys!

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:iconcold-blooded-angel:
and they call them the Diamond dogs?

great stuff, really dig the bear head and the guy. The colours look lovely and rich on my monitor.

Something seems a little off to me on the 2 right girls faces. I think the blondes eyes are a tiny bit wonky, only a pixel or two though. I think the redhead might be a bit broad shouldered, or her head is placed to far to the right or something like that.
Lastly the guys crotch. possibly try adding a hint of the inner seam of his pants and check some references for how the fabric around that area folds. I think if you adjust that it might make his leg look less awkward.
Hope that helps a bit mate.

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:iconwraithdragon:
Wow, looking good man!

I agree with Rach about the crotch.... there's a sentence I never thought I'd say =P
I think that if you make the zipper run down between his legs, like it should, you'll totally improve that whole area. As it is now it looks like it is on the outside of his raised leg.
Also with the hand holding the glass, his wrist looks like it is practically flat. I think that if you add more volume to the sleeve (more roundness?), that it should fix that right up.

Anyways, I hope that helps man. =)

Oh, is that Van Gogh's Starry Night on the right? Nice touch!

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great job, it looks realy awesome.
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I really like, but who is dimond dave?
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Some character in a project I'm supposedly working on.
He's some kind of pimp with a penchant for diamonds or something.

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:iconcharkxl:
thanks!

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Yeah, thought I'd chuck up some van gogh and carravaggio in the paintings there for a lil' detailing.

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I hate the girl's faces, and I can see now what you mean with the crotch. Gonna have to add some more tones and do some liquifying before I can say it's finished, thanks a bunch!

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It's nice. Just adds that extra little details. =)

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